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Destiny (or The Third Eye)

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Pilanesberg

Pilanesberg


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Destiny (or The Third Eye)

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How beautiful, she thought,

As she stopped her car.

A cool breeze rustled the trees.

What a wonderful scene

With the lake below

Shining bright in the clear sunlight

Venturing further from the roadside

Into the long grass she took a look

Through her camera lens, cliCK,

Another cliCK and yet another.

CRunCH of leaves on the ground

CRunCH…

Her breath caught in her throat

As she swung round to see

Him step out from behind a tree…

Her destiny…

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Image and poem: ©Denise G Allen, 03 August 2013 07:27

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Author: adeeyoyo

I am a middle-aged South African woman, living in Johannesburg. I began writing poetry towards the end of May 2010. I love animals – sometimes more than people!

16 thoughts on “Destiny (or The Third Eye)

  1. Wow this one is good… love the photo as well…

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  2. Nicely ambiguous ending. 🙂

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  3. hoping it is a good destiny you know…and not some terror behind the tree…smiles…ha…interesting tension in the end…

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  4. Hmm, now I wonder what her destiny is? Love the pic too!

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  5. Oooer – my heart is racing. it could be good or bad! And in the Pilansberg, it could be a lion!

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  6. The romantic side of you is appearing more and more often Denise, that’s a good thing. Nice work.

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  7. Lovely one, adee. 🙂

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  8. Good one to go with that shot!

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