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Burned

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Adulation warped his image:

Mirror-perfect it seemed to him,

He was bigger than all,

Better than all,

Even the law.

But pride goes before a fall.

He flew too close to the sun

Like Icarus of old, and

Despite all his gold

He was consumed

By the flames of his own

Imperfection.

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©Denise G Allen, 21 February 2014 07:17

Author: adeeyoyo

I am a middle-aged South African woman, living in Johannesburg. I began writing poetry towards the end of May 2010. I love animals – sometimes more than people!

20 thoughts on “Burned

  1. i need to think on this one…it was a bit of a surprising close
    consumed by her imperfection.

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  2. In a nutshell, adee. Excellent poem.

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  3. Great poem! I read it twice, wanting to capture all of the twists.🙂

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  4. Hubris. A recurrent theme throughout history, both individual and collective.

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  5. This is fantastic just as Ben says it Hubris. He had lost all humbleness.

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  6. Guzman? Whoeva, pride can be a killer. Well done.

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  7. http://www.cnn.com/2014/02/22/world/americas/mexico-cartel-chief-arrest/

    Wow, Mike! Yes I agree… arrogance taken up a notch from ‘normal’, huh?

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  8. Good poem with great rhythm, Adee. Justin Bieber springs to mind. What a horrible little ratbag.

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  9. When you think of it, Bb, there are quite a few… our ‘most esteemed’ president and perhaps even Joost van der Westhuizen to mention only two.

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