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I write what I feel…

Invisible World



Thoughts and feelings intermingle,

Coloured lights and darker shadows

Swirling round without a sound;

Invisible world that hides within ~

Unseen world inside our skin.

What we feel is just as real

As the things we touch and smell.


©Denise G Allen, 08 March 2014 05:30


Author: adeeyoyo

I am a middle-aged South African woman, living in Johannesburg. I began writing poetry towards the end of May 2010. I love animals – sometimes more than people! I am back after a break. Thanks for still being here, if you are! Missed you! xxx

6 thoughts on “Invisible World

  1. Excellent writing, and so true adee. Sometimes our thoughts and feelings are far more real to us than the physical world we live in.


  2. What we feel is just as real … words of wisdom, Denise.
    blessings ~ maxi


  3. its pretty crazy when you think of the complexity of our bodies…and all that goes on….what we feel is real…to us, at least…


  4. Poetic veracity at its purest. Well done.


  5. To me there is an eternity’s worth of world to cross inside my head…sometimes I am even lost. And when coupled with nerves,veins,muscles and organs …there really IS an invisible world inside our skin!


  6. So true. And sometimes, moreso.


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