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Invisible World

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Thoughts and feelings intermingle,

Coloured lights and darker shadows

Swirling round without a sound;

Invisible world that hides within ~

Unseen world inside our skin.

What we feel is just as real

As the things we touch and smell.

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©Denise G Allen, 08 March 2014 05:30

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Author: adeeyoyo

I am a middle-aged South African woman, living in Johannesburg. I began writing poetry towards the end of May 2010. I love animals – sometimes more than people!

6 thoughts on “Invisible World

  1. Excellent writing, and so true adee. Sometimes our thoughts and feelings are far more real to us than the physical world we live in.

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  2. What we feel is just as real … words of wisdom, Denise.
    blessings ~ maxi

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  3. its pretty crazy when you think of the complexity of our bodies…and all that goes on….what we feel is real…to us, at least…

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  4. Poetic veracity at its purest. Well done.

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  5. To me there is an eternity’s worth of world to cross inside my head…sometimes I am even lost. And when coupled with nerves,veins,muscles and organs …there really IS an invisible world inside our skin!

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  6. So true. And sometimes, moreso.

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