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The Painting

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Subdued colours

Weave the painting

Slightly out of focus

In the smoke-filled room.

People twirled

In another world

On the spinning floor.

Only the music

Holds them together

Tight against each other

Until… until… slowly

The magic of the music

Fades into the night.
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©Denise G Allen, 27 March 2014 07:24

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Author: adeeyoyo

I am a middle-aged South African woman, living in Johannesburg. I began writing poetry towards the end of May 2010. I love animals – sometimes more than people!

4 thoughts on “The Painting

  1. makes me think of a vetriano painting….ah, to hear the music in art….smiles.

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  2. Smoked filled room. Not many of those these days. Enjoyed the dance.

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