Adeeyoyo's Blog

I write what I feel…

Feelings (an unfinished poem)



As fragile as a petal,

As treasured as a jewel,

As brittle as a crystal,



©Denise G Allen, 25 May 2014 06:17

Author: adeeyoyo

I am a middle-aged South African woman, living in Johannesburg. I began writing poetry towards the end of May 2010. I love animals – sometimes more than people! I am back after a break. Thanks for still being here, if you are! Missed you! xxx

2 thoughts on “Feelings (an unfinished poem)

  1. I quite like it just as it is. On the other hand I am curious as to where it might go.


  2. I like it… leaves me wondering whats to come…


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