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Spit

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Post No. 870

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Spit

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Is this how it felt

spit out of the womb

cold after the warm

his eyes wide as the room

would not meet mine

unreality fogged my brain

sp-l-it me open

‘til there were two

one watching through my eyes

while i died

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©Denise G Allen, 08 September 2015 16:31

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Author: adeeyoyo

I am a middle-aged South African woman, living in Johannesburg. I began writing poetry towards the end of May 2010. I love animals – sometimes more than people!

2 thoughts on “Spit

  1. Yikes, this is a bit scary. I hate to imagine being conscious as my body is cooling before death.
    This gave me a bit of a shiver honestly.

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    • This is not SciFi; it really happened and is as clear to me today as it was then. When I read about people floating above their bodies this was very similar, except we were side by side. I think shock drives this to happen as a self-preservation thing. Whatever. Also, as it happened time froze for moments. Btw, the first three lines are pure fiction. Thanks for reading, x.

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