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The Droplet

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Post No. 915

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The Droplet

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As I watched

The line ran

Glistening silver

Towards the edge

Hesitated, elongated

Then drooped over

Poised to fall…

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©Denise G Allen, 13 February 2016 03:04

 

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Author: adeeyoyo

I am a middle-aged South African woman, living in Johannesburg. I began writing poetry towards the end of May 2010. I love animals – sometimes more than people!

2 thoughts on “The Droplet

  1. There was a song from long ago, “Anticipation..”an-ti-ci-pa-ation it’s keeping me w-a-aiting……” That was the first thought that I had, upon seeing in my mind’s eye, that singular droplet poised on the edge, the brink, the very precipice of its existence as an entity unto itself. How’s that for waxing poetically? lol. A very thought provoking poem Denise, as I find most of your works to be.

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  2. Your words describe my picture so accurately, Jake. Thank you for your really insightful comment. (and for the flattery, lol)

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