Adeeyoyo's Blog

I write what I feel…



Post No.953

11 November 2016



Air permeates the veil

Enough to breathe, 

Enough to sigh

A brief goodbye.


Copyright: Denise Allen 11.11.2016 08:30

Author: adeeyoyo

I am a middle-aged South African woman, living in Johannesburg. I began writing poetry towards the end of May 2010. I love animals – sometimes more than people! I am back after a break. Thanks for still being here, if you are! Missed you! xxx

2 thoughts on “Sorrow

  1. You evoke an ephemeral atmosphere here which seems totally appropriate to the content. Well accomplished, Denise.


  2. Thank you Ben. ☺


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