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Shadow on the Sun

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In the eyes of day

When the world is bright

And all is right

A shadow glides

As the blackbird flies

Across the sun

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©DGA 23 February 2012 14:27

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Author: adeeyoyo

I am a middle-aged South African woman, living in Johannesburg. I began writing poetry towards the end of May 2010. I love animals – sometimes more than people!

24 thoughts on “Shadow on the Sun

  1. Thanks, Paul. It’s so good to be back… 😀

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  2. Have you been away, have i missed you…not seen any posts from you for ages..are you ok

    love P

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  3. How nice to hear from you again, Denise.
    Hope your project is going / has gone well.
    Nice verse
    John

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  4. A lovely scene. Glad to have you back. Hope you enjoyed your time away.

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  5. That sounds like…”for every silver lining..there’s a dark cloud” or did I misinterpret? In any case WELCOME BACK Denise. Hope your hiatus went well.

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  6. Your work puts me at ease, my friend.
    Thank you.

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  7. Although the sun glows with promise, does not mean a dark shadow can’t cast a problem.

    Blessings – Maxi

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  8. Great to see you back again, Adee. Lovely descriptive poem. 😉

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  9. ah a lovely image you capture….and great to see you back!!!

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  10. Its a fascinating if you can get a good shot with your camera when a bird eclipses sun. Too good.

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  11. I would love to be able to do it, Sunamu. Maybe one day…

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  12. An eerie prescience …

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  13. It is a nice scene I have seen a few times myself. Makes me feel as if I am in another world. Hey, great to have you back!

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