Adeeyoyo's Blog

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Shadow on the Sun



In the eyes of day

When the world is bright

And all is right

A shadow glides

As the blackbird flies

Across the sun


©DGA 23 February 2012 14:27

Author: adeeyoyo

I am a middle-aged South African woman, living in Johannesburg. I began writing poetry towards the end of May 2010. I love animals – sometimes more than people! I am back after a break. Thanks for still being here, if you are! Missed you! xxx

24 thoughts on “Shadow on the Sun

  1. Thanks, Paul. It’s so good to be back… 😀


  2. Have you been away, have i missed you…not seen any posts from you for ages..are you ok

    love P


  3. How nice to hear from you again, Denise.
    Hope your project is going / has gone well.
    Nice verse


  4. A lovely scene. Glad to have you back. Hope you enjoyed your time away.


  5. That sounds like…”for every silver lining..there’s a dark cloud” or did I misinterpret? In any case WELCOME BACK Denise. Hope your hiatus went well.


  6. Your work puts me at ease, my friend.
    Thank you.


  7. Although the sun glows with promise, does not mean a dark shadow can’t cast a problem.

    Blessings – Maxi


  8. Great to see you back again, Adee. Lovely descriptive poem. 😉


  9. ah a lovely image you capture….and great to see you back!!!


  10. Its a fascinating if you can get a good shot with your camera when a bird eclipses sun. Too good.


  11. I would love to be able to do it, Sunamu. Maybe one day…


  12. An eerie prescience …


  13. It is a nice scene I have seen a few times myself. Makes me feel as if I am in another world. Hey, great to have you back!


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