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In varying phases of readiness
Waiting for God
Adventurers and explorers
At different stages assorted ages
Waiting for God
Retired from this earth
Going to a new birth
Waiting for God
Leaving on a ghost train
Through the tunnel of love
Waiting for God
Travelling down the dark path
Into the bright light
Waiting for God
Diverse faiths some without
Some are weak others stout
Waiting for God
Hallelujah
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©Denise G Allen, 16 January 2013 03:43
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16/01/2013 at 4:38 am
ha i rather like the leaving on a ghost train stanza….ugh…waiting on god is a tough subject for me… i believe…i struggle with wanting my own timing though at times…smiles.
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16/01/2013 at 4:47 am
Oh, that crept in when I wasn’t looking, lol! I think we all struggle with that, Brian. 🙂
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16/01/2013 at 7:59 am
And He most assuredly is waiting for us.. Beautiful poem and striking visuals..
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16/01/2013 at 8:07 am
Thanks. Jake. I did not accomplish what I really wanted. I may revamp it some time down the line…
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16/01/2013 at 6:07 pm
Ah, the never ending editing process. I know well the feeling. Still, very nicely done..
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16/01/2013 at 10:55 am
Really wonderful poem adee…
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16/01/2013 at 1:08 pm
Thanks, Hope. I woke up in the early hours and just had to write it. 🙂
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16/01/2013 at 11:43 am
Going to a new birth… It will be heavenly.
Blessings ~ Maxi
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16/01/2013 at 1:10 pm
I think it may be llike that, but I’ll have to wait and see… 🙂
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17/01/2013 at 4:38 pm
We are all in there somewhere, Denise.
Shrewd poem, a pleasure to read
John.
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17/01/2013 at 6:07 pm
That’s true, we are all waaiting for God. Thanks, John.
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18/01/2013 at 3:02 am
So live each day as though it’s your last Because the world could blow up with one big blast!
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18/01/2013 at 5:21 am
Ugh, I hope that doesn’t happen, Lucien. Thanks for your visit and comment.
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23/01/2013 at 6:13 pm
We are all waiting on something aren’t we?
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23/01/2013 at 6:34 pm
Yes, I think most of us are. I’m afraid I’ve never been a mover and a shaker, Jeannie. 🙂
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