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The Street Beggar

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The Street Beggar

On a cold wintery morning
Under the weak watery sun
Mother and child shivered together,
On a day barely begun.

They waited on the traffic isle
For the rush of cars to start,
Hoping for some charity
To relieve their starving hearts.

A few cars passed, too fast to see,
Then, bumper to bumper they came and went,
Blinkered people safe and warm,
Snug in their cocoons.

Photo: http://www.photobucket.com
©DGA 04.06.2010

Author: adeeyoyo

I am a middle-aged South African woman, living in Johannesburg. I began writing poetry towards the end of May 2010. I love animals – sometimes more than people! I am back after a break. Thanks for still being here, if you are! Missed you! xxx

15 thoughts on “The Street Beggar

  1. I am impressed, the analogy of cars / cocoons is very clever.

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  2. We see the same things…..

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    • Well… er… both, I think. She hopes for some kindness and there must be some small amount of anticipation for her to spend such an uncomfortable time braving the elements… don’t you think?

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  3. That is so good.
    Why is it….I have you on my blogroll but you do not come up in my Blog surfer?

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  4. This is brilliant, Adee 🙂
    xx

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  5. Such a picture you’ve painted! I like your use of “starving hearts” – they needed nourishment of many kinds.

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    • Thanks for your comment, GD. I have just downloaded Photoscape which you mentioned in your last post and am looking forward to experimenting! I was so pleased to see that it is MS compatible with XP, Vista and 7. Thank you for mentioning it by name.

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  6. Very good!

    Of course, these days everyone suspects a ‘rent-a-baby’ situation, too.

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