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I write what I feel…

Goodbye

22 Comments

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I wrote

A note

And watched it float

Far far away

Across the bay

Then into the sea

With love from me

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©Denise G Allen, 10 February 2013 10:28

Author: adeeyoyo

I am a middle-aged South African woman, living in Johannesburg. I began writing poetry towards the end of May 2010. I love animals – sometimes more than people! I am back after a break. Thanks for still being here, if you are! Missed you! xxx

22 thoughts on “Goodbye

  1. at least its with love…even if its goodbye…smiles.

    happy monday to you adee…

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  2. Lovely one adee, not saying goodbye I hope though?

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  3. The world can do with all the love we can spread 🙂

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  4. Simplicity often works so well!

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  5. Next time put a stamp on envelope.

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  6. Oh yeah Denise, spreadin’ the love.
    Blessings ~ Maxi

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    • Ooh boy, I have commented but it seems to have disappeared, Maxi. WP wasn’t behaving last evening though. I do try hard to spread the love, lol! Bless you, dear friend. ♥

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  7. nice, Adee… peaceful & healing, a way perhaps of letting go something old that still had one in its hooks…

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  8. I could see it floating away. Making way for something new.
    Hugs,
    Jeannie

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  9. I could see that note bobbing up and down in the water. 🙂

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  10. This is so lovely and sweet – hope it is found and makes someone’s day.

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