.
I wrote
A note
And watched it float
Far far away
Across the bay
Then into the sea
With love from me
.
ยฉDenise G Allen, 10 February 2013 10:28
.
I wrote
A note
And watched it float
Far far away
Across the bay
Then into the sea
With love from me
.
ยฉDenise G Allen, 10 February 2013 10:28
I am a middle-aged South African woman, living in Johannesburg. I began writing poetry towards the end of May 2010. I love animals โ sometimes more than people! I am back after a break. Thanks for still being here, if you are! Missed you! xxx
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11/02/2013 at 6:39 am
at least its with love…even if its goodbye…smiles.
happy monday to you adee…
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11/02/2013 at 6:44 am
And to you, dear Brian. ๐
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11/02/2013 at 7:42 am
Lovely one adee, not saying goodbye I hope though?
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11/02/2013 at 7:46 am
Thanks, Hope, purely fiction, lol.
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11/02/2013 at 7:48 am
Good ๐
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11/02/2013 at 2:37 pm
Thanks, Hope ๐
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11/02/2013 at 7:58 am
The world can do with all the love we can spread ๐
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11/02/2013 at 8:41 am
How right you are, Eric. ๐
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11/02/2013 at 9:24 am
Simplicity often works so well!
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11/02/2013 at 9:35 am
I prefer ‘understated’ too, especially for emotions, Col, but I often forget, lol!
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11/02/2013 at 1:42 pm
Next time put a stamp on envelope.
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11/02/2013 at 2:38 pm
Oh dear, I thought I had forgotten something… ๐
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11/02/2013 at 5:45 pm
Oh yeah Denise, spreadin’ the love.
Blessings ~ Maxi
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12/02/2013 at 6:30 am
Ooh boy, I have commented but it seems to have disappeared, Maxi. WP wasn’t behaving last evening though. I do try hard to spread the love, lol! Bless you, dear friend. โฅ
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11/02/2013 at 6:04 pm
nice, Adee… peaceful & healing, a way perhaps of letting go something old that still had one in its hooks…
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11/02/2013 at 9:35 pm
Letting go of the past, Ruth… thanks. ๐
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12/02/2013 at 5:16 am
I could see it floating away. Making way for something new.
Hugs,
Jeannie
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12/02/2013 at 6:32 am
Ah yes, Jeannie, so could I. ๐
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12/02/2013 at 9:52 pm
I could see that note bobbing up and down in the water. ๐
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13/02/2013 at 6:00 am
So could I… ๐
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16/02/2013 at 7:37 am
This is so lovely and sweet – hope it is found and makes someone’s day.
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16/02/2013 at 8:35 am
Thanks, BB. Acceptance of an ending perhaps…
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