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Invisible 3



Chosen for her easy nature

Pliability, malleability

Plasticine-like quality

To be moulded into the perfect wife

To share his ambitions

His dreams and drive

T’wards the perfect life


And she, in love with love

Flattered and thrilled

Sweet-talked and cajoled

Happy to be chosen by this boy

From all the girls around

Was quite giddy with joy

To be the one he’d found


And so the years sped by

He, working hard with no time to play

Building his empire day by day

His trophy-wife playing her role

Yes dear, no dear, three bags full dear

Whatever you say dear I will agree

As long as I know that you love only me



©DGA 14 October 2011 07:11

Author: adeeyoyo

I am a middle-aged South African woman, living in Johannesburg. I began writing poetry towards the end of May 2010. I love animals – sometimes more than people! I am back after a break. Thanks for still being here, if you are! Missed you! xxx

10 thoughts on “Invisible 3

  1. As the ‘Fairy Tale’ unravels..(A soap opera)


  2. I’m loving watching the stages of this…. keep waiting for it to turn…..


  3. The suspense is killing me!


  4. I know!!! Let’s make an epic original movie…and call it the stetsons wives…
    Do you think that too common a name? Just Kidding.. certainly nothing common about you and your way with words baby girl… Awesome Prose!!!
    Bless You


    • I have to plead innocence… I know that ignorance is no excuse, but I hadn’t heard of ‘Stepson’s’ wives before I started this, and still haven’t googled it, lol! But I shall do so immediately this is finished – my interest has been piqued…


  5. Uh oh, sounds as if wifey is in “the better than being alone” category.


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