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Lonely

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a-lone

as one

watching

listening

being apart

but not a-part

detach

un-attach

sole

soul

solitary

separate

©DGA 19 September 2011 08:45

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Author: adeeyoyo

I am a middle-aged South African woman, living in Johannesburg. I began writing poetry towards the end of May 2010. I love animals – sometimes more than people!

26 thoughts on “Lonely

  1. You’re never alone with all these blog readers around you…God Bless You
    paul

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  2. The word arrangement validates the idea as it seems like a single doric column

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  3. nice word play…alone can be a sad place or happy place…everyone wants to play a-part though….smiles

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  4. Interesting but sad, Denise.
    I am tempted to add other words, but cannot. You have really made me think!
    Thank you.
    John

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  5. and sad. Are you feeling like that today?

    Can I make you smile :-))

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  6. well done 🙂

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  7. Very nice word play, there. Thought provoking

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  8. I didn’t find it sad because alone-ness, right now, is something to covet. Life will probably change….somehow I equate it with privacy.

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  9. Sometimes I treasure the solitude. Sometimes I despise it.

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  10. I’m glad I’m not the only lone one Denise. 🙂 Balance is a constant struggle I think for those who get drained easily by crowds or a lot of socializing. I always get drained, really bummed out.

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  11. I agree with blueviolet completely. Like your wordplay here, Denise. Very well done!

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  12. Thanks Selma. 😀

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  13. I like the development!

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