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We fit Together

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We fit Together

We fit together
Like a knife and fork,
Bacon and eggs,
Salt and pepper.
You and I are akin:
Two sides of a coin,
Two halves of a whole,
A fruit with its skin.
We think the same thoughts,
Dream the same dreams
And, strange as it seems,
Destiny has never
Brought us together.

Picture: pravsworld.com/anvari.org

©DGA 11.09.2010

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Author: adeeyoyo

I am a middle-aged South African woman, living in Johannesburg. I began writing poetry towards the end of May 2010. I love animals – sometimes more than people!

20 thoughts on “We fit Together

  1. How sad, those last two lines.

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  2. Oh I love this. This is my favourite one so far! The last 2 lines give it such a kick…love it…

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  3. what a beautiful poem,
    profound ending…
    Thanks for sharing!

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  4. oh heavy twist there in the end…sounds like two driends and one has deciced to want more…

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  5. Lovely…maybe just as well fate has decided that way…too alike is boring!

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  6. Very interesting, so upbeat and then so offbeat. I like it a lot

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  7. Makes me sad the end Adee 😦 xx Well penned x

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  8. I only know one couple like that and they are very
    happy.
    most happy couples I know are opposites.
    Sad and powerful ending!

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  9. ok how is this supposedto mean?

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  10. Ahhhh…One can’t help but sigh…

    LOL!

    Here’s the thing, the one we’re with…may not be the skin…But he’ll have to do 😉

    LOVED IT!!

    Especially the last, sad and yet Funny lines…

    Great Work!! I truly enjoy your Style!

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